Listening to my manuscript through a screen reader is really brining home just how much I repeat myself in this one.

So of that repetition I've cut out as I go. Some of it... well there's a reason I ask at one point 'Is this horse dead yet? Can I stop beating it now?'

And isn't because I expect fokls to have an EASY time with those ideas...

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