@strangeseawolf

Perhaps I'm being lazy. I haven't tried very hard

The problem is the way I feel about it

Threading everything through one mind is beginning to feel claustrophobic (almost like stalking the main character) and I'm not sure I can keep the story interesting

In my novelx2, I had an interplay of two voices, him and her, and I enjoyed that because they could play off each other. Here, it feels drab by comparison and I'm getting restless!

#WritingWonders
#PoV #PointOfView

A #PointOfView can be a dangerous luxury when substituted
for #Insight and #Understanding.
- Marshall McLuhan
http://www.jlhuie.com/2022/11/not-as-it-appears.html?spref=tw