My #writing coach: consider injecting some more conflict here. Something has to happen to justify this turn.

Me, a #director obsessed with visual allegory: I’d like to put everyone waist deep in #LakeHuron again.*

Writing coach: what.

Me: everything is a dreamscape!

Coach: stop it. write WORDS.

Me: DREAMMMSSS

*see profile header image for bts of #UpToHere https://vimeo.com/448973382