I wrote that long post about how Book 2 of #LegendOfKorra needed some major fixes.

So now I'm writing it! I'd love for folks to read and provide feedback. Especially to let me know if the story makes sense so far, if the characters feel like themselves, and what you like.

I'm finding it much easier to write from Korra and Asami's perspectives. Writing from Mako's is hard, but I need to if I'm to resurrect his character and give him some sort of motivations for existing in Team Avatar (he can't stay as mr-mc-blandness). Bolin's story arc worries me the most, I want to do that one with care, which makes me think I ought to write an interlude from his perspective too which will also be difficult.

I'm trying to keep similar beats from the original. The beginning of my rewrite does mirror the start of the original, but I deviate with the trip to the South Pole and what Asami discovers back in Wolf's Cove.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/45387310

#Writing #Rewriting #Book2LegendOfKorra #AO3 #Feedback #PleaseRead

Here's the original thread that contains my thoughts on how to fix Book 2: https://ni.hil.ist/@TheBird/109962706215987163