@johnhowesauthor Yes. Style is important. There's the danger of making it sound cold, but remember I'm talking about narration primarily, not necessarily dialog. #Concision and #ellipsis (the lack thereof) is my chief problem, the one the agent and publisher flagged. This is where I start serious #revision, as I am right now.

@champ

(2/2) This also reminds me of #NoamChomsky's theories about #concision : we have limited time AND characters on here so a lot of debates end up being link-slinging because we have no space to parahprase? (I know there are Mast instances with huge post allowances.)

tl;dr - Being terminally online makes me snippy and impolite in a manner I would dread to be in real life.

So *thank you* for reminding me of those tendencies. ~ bows ~

@fostermwolf #dickens forevermore! Can't read him now because I end up emulating his writing style and my biggest writing problem is #concision. Kudos for admitting liking his stories.

#actualitté #numérique "Les menteurs ne seront plus à l'abri..." #Concision #Détail #Mensonge ... https://actualitte.com/article/98148/technologie/les-menteurs-ne-seront-plus-a-l-abri

#actualitté #numérique "Les menteurs ne seront plus à l'abri..." #Concision #Détail #Mensonge ... https://actualitte.com/article/98148/technologie/les-menteurs-ne-seront-plus-a-l-abri

Rappel utile : «osm.org» est nettement plus court que «maps.google.com». #concision