The first page of my book is an ominous prophecy that outlines the main conflict of the story, and serves as a framework for all future prophecies contained within. Let me know what you think, constructive criticism encouraged.
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A short story about meal-replacement bars, a human who worked for an alien convenience-store #Emporium, and the things done to his body: https://ontploffing.tumblr.com/post/177767232223/keito-was-unhappily-munching-on-yet-another-brown
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