Yuyine · @Yuyine
407 followers · 440 posts · Server imaginair.es

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Si jamais vous n’avez pas encore craqué, voici les titres coups de cœur à ne pas louper:

- Dans l’ombre de Paris de Morgan of Glencoe: un univers riche, des personnages inoubliables, inclusif et des émotions intenses
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- Un psaume pour les recyclés sauvages de Becky Chambers: pour celleux qui ont besoin de souffler. Lumineux!
- Subtil béton de Les Aggloméré•e•s: projet d’écriture collaboratif, imaginaire des marges, très actuel
- Des milliards de tapis de cheveux d’Andreas Eschbach: classique, magnifiquement construit, envoûtant
- Le chant des géants de David Bry: épique, dramatique, intense et poétique
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- Je suis le rêve des autres de Christian Chavassieux: un conte initiatique de qualité, plein de sagesse
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Jane Turner - SFFH editor · @Jane_33South
215 followers · 459 posts · Server wandering.shop

Let's do an intro!

Hello to all !

I'm Jane and I'm an and fan who loves helping and . I'm always after a new favourite story!

I can help with , or . I also offer - a mix of developmental and gentle copyediting.

Give me a ping to get a and find out exactly how I could help you.

www.33southtextworks.com

#SFFWriters #editor #sff #authors #writers #copyediting #developmental #editing #betareading #critiques #hybridedits #freesample

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Gérald SERAI · @geraldserai
15 followers · 3351 posts · Server mastodon.iriseden.eu
Nate! · @nate
59 followers · 1607 posts · Server frogmob.life

Fellow writers (please boost!)

How do you gather feedback? My main writing partners are busy with "life" right now and I'd love to get some eyes on my work.

Has anyone used Scribophile or something similar? Are there feedback groups that I should avoid?

#critiques #writing #amwriting

Last updated 1 year ago

valsombra · @valsombra
231 followers · 99 posts · Server chaosfem.tw

Shot in the dark, but looking for & on a short story! I have a 4/30 deadline and just finished the first draft today.

8k words of pulp fantasy \ cosmic \ romance.

Help a out!

docs.google.com/document/d/1Ch

#feedback #critiques #horror #lgbtq #transgirl #writing #shortstories #authors

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Jaycee Jarvis · @Jaycee
89 followers · 313 posts · Server romancelandia.club

Only a couple of days left to bid on all the amazing items in the charity auction!

All proceeds go to The Every Voice Coalition and Lambda Legal, so treat yourself and support an important cause at the same time.

I'm offering an annotated copy of Taxing Courtship. If you've ever wanted to know more about the Hands of Destin series this is your chance!
writersforhope.com/jayceejarvi

#swag #SignedBooks #bookstodon #amwriting #amreading #critiques #manuscript #screenplay #books #writersforhope

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mrlich 🎨 · @mrlich
57 followers · 338 posts · Server mastodon.art

Really trying hard to improve my skills. Especially where sub surface scattering is concerned.

Feels like it’s getting there (very) slowly, but surely. / suggestions welcome (as well as RTs to collect more ).

#procreate #digitalcolor #art #skin #elf #feedback #critiques #color

Last updated 1 year ago

RS, Author, Novelist · @sfwrtr
71 followers · 219 posts · Server eldritch.cafe

@skimgoth

I think you should commit yourself to writing an intimate character arc. You will learn something about yourself one way or another. If you don't like the result, just write it again. It's all good. What follows is my opinions, so take them if they help you or ignore them if they don't.

My thoughts about any event in a story are pretty simple: Does it advance the story? If not, cut it. If it seems gratuitous by your definition (your question implies this is true), you might want to make the story about what's gratuitous instead and change the genre from fantasy-first to erotica-first.Take care not to provide red herrings by over emphasizing things readers might key into, like sex scenes.

Specifically about sex scenes, especially in genres where they may be rarer than in mainstream: The reader is much better at imagining stuff than most people give them credit for. Consider hinting, innuendo, and metaphor. Eroticism vs an anatomy lesson. In the aftermath, have your characters think about what happened and how they feel about it.

I read the blurb. For me, it makes the story seem more about the act than about what it means to Esor to think he's capable of saying no, why he feels that's so important, and why the premarital encounter is making him crazy.

Feel free to ask questions. I answer interesting ones.

#writing #writinglife #critiques

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Hector Lahminewski · @lahminewski
69 followers · 90 posts · Server tooting.ch

Bon, je suis en train de quitter définitivement Facebook.
J'ai réfléchi un moment à développer un gros argumentaire pour expliquer les raisons, mais je me rends compte que ce travail existe déjà.... 😝

Si vous avez des articles et des ressources sur le sujet, je suis preneur. :boost:

En attendant, je vous laisse avec cet article de Wikipédia qui résume déjà de nombreux points.
fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Critique

#economiedelattention #reseauxsociaux #algorithme #critiques #wikipedia #meta #facebook

Last updated 2 years ago

Jane Turner - SFFH editor · @Jane_33South
179 followers · 247 posts · Server wandering.shop

New year, new intro!

Hello to all !

I'm Jane and I'm an and fan who loves helping and . I'm always after a new favourite story 😊

I can help with , or . I also offer - a mix of developmental and gentle copyediting.

Give me a ping and we'll chat about how I can help with your project 😃

And, just because, here's some feline comedy...

#SFFWriters #editor #sff #authors #writers #copyediting #developmental #editing #betareading #critiques #hybridedits

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J_Chevillotte · @J_Chevillotte
1 followers · 11 posts · Server mastodon.top

[📌 ] Est paru ce jour au le décret étendant la prime à l’ensemble des auxiliaires médicaux travaillant dans ces services à partir du 01/12/2022 : , , , , , , ,
👉 urlz.fr/kdy3

#prime #fph #jorf #soins #critiques #ide #ipa #MERM #tlabo #ash #psychologues #pph #sagefemmes

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Sarah J. Jackson · @sjjphd
551 followers · 57 posts · Server dair-community.social

So if you ever want to chat with me about public sphere theory, , and media, , media, , and how the ways we use and shape and , and always have, I'm your girl. I'll also talk to you about , , and things. For now, I'm watching and grieving the once potential of even as folks keeps finding space to make , , and there.

#counterpublics #race #media #activism #feminist #Black #technology #politics #culture #grief #dogs #hippie #twitter #jokes #critiques #change

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Amitha Jagannath Knight · @amitha
276 followers · 552 posts · Server mastodon.coffee
jpl_lambert 💉…💉 · @jpl_lambert
58 followers · 154 posts · Server mastodon.social

4/4

= et , les et leur préfèrent leurs Suiveurs…

… dont l'ancien assistant d'Aldrich : SL doit tout à Vera Cruz ⤴️ et au début de "Quatre du Texas" (après 20 minutes, il faut abandonner le Rat Pack à sa flemme)  !⤵️
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bfi.org.uk/sight-and-sound/gre

#top100 #hawks #aldrich #critiques #directors

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jpl_lambert 💉…💉 · @jpl_lambert
58 followers · 153 posts · Server mastodon.social

3/4

Dans Le Mépris ( = 54e, = 46e) montre l'affiche de de et, par la présence de , évoque The Big Knife de Robert , deux très grands cinéastes scandaleusement oubliés par les Critiques et les Directors…

#top100 #critiques #directors #godard #hatari #hawks #JackPalance #aldrich

Last updated 2 years ago

Jane Turner - SFFH editor · @Jane_33South
116 followers · 118 posts · Server wandering.shop

Hello to all !

I'm Jane and I'm an and fan who loves helping and . I'm always after a new favourite story!

I can help with , or . I also offer - a mix of developmental and gentle copyediting.

Give me a ping to get a and find out exactly how I could help you.

And, just because you've got this far, here's a picture of one of my

#SFFWriters #editor #sff #authors #writers #copyediting #developmental #editing #betareading #critiques #hybridedits #freesample #heroes

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Ana · @airdefilm
32 followers · 366 posts · Server mastodon.online

Exercice de style, un site de rédigées en une seule phrase.
Sorti de sa somnolence, il reprend la plume

Inclut le test de

1phrase.com/

#bechdel #critiques

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Ana · @airdefilm
23 followers · 337 posts · Server mastodon.online

Exercice de style, un site de rédigées en une seule phrase.
Sorti de sa somnolence, il reprend la plume
1phrase.com

#critiques

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Great_Albums · @Great_Albums
246 followers · 121 posts · Server mstdn.social

(pour mes followers français). Salut! Bien que mes critiques soient principalement en , je comprends les deux langues, alors n'hésitez pas à commenter/discuter en . De temps en temps, il se peut que je poste des d'artistes de que j'écrirai dans cette langue.

#languefrancaise #critiques #francais #anglais #Introduction

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Jeet Sukumaran · @jeetsukumaran
193 followers · 164 posts · Server ecoevo.social

Any , , , etc. welcome

#suggestions #feedback #critiques

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