a reviewer informs that is NOT against , it is against the abundant use of adverbs. "Instead of these verbal atrocities, switch over to a more powerful verb. For instance, instead of saying that someone is 'walking slowly' you can say they 'tip-toed' or they 'crept.' That way, your writing is more vivid.
( @billweinberg and take note!

#writers #hemingwayapp #adverbs #grammarians #editors

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