Elizabeth C. Bunce · @ecbunce
39 followers · 28 posts · Server indieweb.social@EggKnees @ellen_hawley @bookstodon Gosh, I think there are several other ways to improve the flow of the example sentences the OP posted there! (in the StackExchange thread on removing "that") I'm a #kidswriter and my editors/CEs often suggest adding words to my sentences to make them clearer for young readers. I'm always trying to shave down my wordcount, and "that"'s an easy one to cut.
Elizabeth C. Bunce · @ecbunce
6 followers · 6 posts · Server indieweb.social
For #waybackwednesday here's a post from my #myrtlemondays series, celebrating the surprisingly elaborate #history of the #typewriter! https://elizabethcbunce.com/2022/08/08/myrtlemondays-qwerty/ #myrtlehardcastlemysteries #histodon #querty #1890s #vintagetech #amwriting #author #kidswriter #peonythecat #catsonduty #bookstodon #writerscommunity
#writerscommunity #bookstodon #catsonduty #peonythecat #kidswriter #author #amwriting #vintagetech #1890s #querty #Histodon #myrtlehardcastlemysteries #typewriter #history #myrtlemondays #waybackwednesday