USNewsper · @USNewsperall
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꧁~Cea~꧂ · @alcea
42 followers · 2789 posts · Server pb.todon.de

The worst three in history:

* cares
* has been that way
* Thats

(This is not a btw .. Just a about the )

#sentences #human #noone #it #always #impossible #philosophical #toot #sad #reminiscing #statusquo #ramblingsalcea

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Amy Fountain · @amyfou
1706 followers · 507 posts · Server lingo.lol

this was a garden path sentence for me...you?

"Breaking News: Biden's poll numbers get stronger, and more" === Biden gets both stronger and more poll numbers somehow?

...multiple seconds of confusion pass...

...Oh. OK. I get it now.

#headlines #GardenPath #sentences #English #parsing

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Queer Lit Cats · @QLC
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Roman ALAN · @romanalanwrites
181 followers · 2226 posts · Server mastodon.nz

@allisonwyss

A recently written sentence that I enjoyed, and which required a few minor revisions (by reading it aloud) is in this post.

The sentence is after this one: "April rolls its little showers of rain to May, May brings the days to June."

I wanted a sentence that would then expand on the passage of time from April to June and evoke a simple, early-18th century rural life.

#writingcommunity #writingconversations #writing #sensibility #sentences

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Roman ALAN · @romanalanwrites
181 followers · 2226 posts · Server mastodon.nz

@allisonwyss

One of the most impressive sentences that I've read was crafted by Joan Didion for her 1966 essay “Some Dreamers of the Golden Dream”.

Some expressions in the sentence show its age, but the build from the banal topics of the opening phrases is so good that the sentence is a short story and character study in itself.

I'll also post one of my own shortly.

#writingcommunity #writingconversations #writing #sensibility #sentences #joandidion

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Allison Wyss · @allisonwyss
1797 followers · 6632 posts · Server zirk.us

For this one I wrote about Nightbitch (by Rachel Yoder) and sensibility. But I also let myself geek about this long and luxurious sentence that piles up imagery for days.

Come across any lovely sentences lately? (Definitely count the ones you write yourself!)

bit.ly/NightbitchDualSens

#writingcommunity #writingconversations #writing #sensibility #sentences #nightbitch #Punctuation

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Richard Forrester - 🐦 Refugee · @RichForrest2
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John Overholt · @overholt
2661 followers · 846 posts · Server glammr.us

This is exactly why I have struggled to adapt my hashtag gong practices to really work on Mastodon. “On top of all that, in-post hashtags feel thirsty. After a decade of Twitter and Instagram, I associate them firmly with spammers and clout-chasing thinkfluencers, that into the of to reach more .” theverge.com/23673125/mastodon

#blessed #shoehorning #pound #symbol #middle #sentences #eyeballs

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GeorgeLThomas · @GeorgeLThomas
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TrendyWebAltar · @TrendyWebAltar
70 followers · 429 posts · Server zirk.us

One of the in is in these lines from 's "Directive":

Back out of all this now too much for us,
Back in a time made simple by the loss
Of detail, burned, dissolved, and broken off
Like graveyard marble sculpture in the weather,
There is a house that is no more a house
Upon a farm that is no more a farm
And in a town that is no more a town.

#best #sentences #american #poetry #robertfrost #poem

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PZM · @PZM
6 followers · 15 posts · Server mastodon.world

Another gorgeous, thoughtful thread from writer
@allisonwyss

This time on the nature & execution of sentences. 📝

zirk.us/@allisonwyss/110035002



#sentences #writingcraft #writingcommunity

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@allisonwyss

I think about sentences in different ways (& probably in different parts of my brain!).

-- As little engines, each moving the plot along: structure & placement are my concern here.

-- As character revelation: I want the reader to know which character is speaking/acting at any given moment.

-- As sound/narrative music: I enjoy playing with sentence flow & cadence.

Ideally, I try to get all 3 to happen at once. 🙂

#amwriting #sentences #writingcraft #writingcommunity

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Allison Wyss · @allisonwyss
1592 followers · 3943 posts · Server zirk.us

My revision class is working on sentences. So many ways to think about writing sentences!

Like how they can mimic the actions that are happening--like making them quick & explosive or long & meandering according to the action. Not every sentence--that can get tedious--but some. Or else I think about how the construction can mimic the way the narrator thinks.

How do you think about sentences?

#writingcommunity #writingcraft #amrevising #sentences #amwriting #amediting

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Yrba Eboovaf 𓃬𓅳 · @leonrobbins
187 followers · 514 posts · Server toot.community
stoicmike · @stoicmike
52 followers · 705 posts · Server zirk.us

Most writers can't write a simple sentence, like, `The dog walked down the street.” -- Charles Bukowksi

#writing #writers #clarity #language #words #sentences

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Antonio · @angallo
60 followers · 645 posts · Server mastodonbooks.net

With the pocket we stopped counting, with the#GPS we have lost our sense of , with we could lose other , until we no longer know how to form and that make , so much so that takes care of it .. . Avoid with AI

#calculator #orientation #chatgpt #skills #sentences #thoughts #sense #ai #competition

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StrangeLeap · @StrangeLeap
9 followers · 25 posts · Server mas.to

Oh those small worms in that lifeless place; what cruelty had kept them there seemed now mercy to the one who without cruelty took their life.

#sentences #writerscommunity #writingcommunity #writers

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