I’m trying to improve my English:

TW: Blood, Violence, Death

"Blood was running from his throat. It was shaping bloody flowers on the bright floor, and that horrifying sight was poetic for Deorlon.

He liked death. Always had, always will.

He knew Aelyn Terion, the ferocious warrior, was ready to fight him.

He was ready too.

When their fight would be over, Aelyn’s blood would shape magnificent flowers."

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I'm trying to improve my english soooo, here we are !

"Aelyn was crying.
Her wife wasn’t here: she had really disappeared.

Aelyn felt sick.
She wanted to kill and destroy.

Her gaze found her sword. It was shining, like a diamond under the bright moon.

She was going to find her wife and bring her back.

Whatever it takes."

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