Paul J Robinson (He/Him) · @pauljrobinson
88 followers · 662 posts · Server mastodon.me.uk

@Evoterra oh my word THIS THIS THIS. Also when I'm reading an About Me page containing any professional self-description using the word "passion/passionate"

#showdonttell

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Dr. Tineke D'Haeseleer · @tinebeest
341 followers · 2835 posts · Server mstdn.social

Radio Blackbird Illustrations is back with a new post, now the grading is all over.

Do you trust experts? Sure! But who's the *real* expert in textbooks?! Or the right one for novice learners? And how do you show that in an image? Check it out! šŸ‘‡

radioblackbirdillustrations.co

#tenurefile #showdonttell #illustratingideas

Last updated 1 year ago

Kath Kirk · @GeckoEdit
336 followers · 191 posts · Server writing.exchange

"Show, don't tell" can be taken too literally and result in a lot of stage-directing and overreliance on visual elements (and pointing and turning and looking and smiling).

I prefer "Evoke, don't explain." Use all the senses and use imagery/figurative language to build those moods and atmospheres.

But that "don't" is a soft "don't." Sometimes a little explaining is okay. It's all about balance.

#writingcommunity #showdonttell #amediting

Last updated 2 years ago

Mike · @Narshada
224 followers · 97 posts · Server masto.ai

So ā€œUnderstanding show donā€™t tell and really getting it,ā€ by Janice Hardy is a must-read for writers imho.

Iā€™m a quarter of the way through the book and applied what Iā€™d read so far to my chapter-in-progress. Itā€™s made such a difference! Not only has it helped me remove author interjects and ā€˜tellingā€™ language, Iā€™ve known what to replace it with. It even got me to remove some passive voice stuff.

Absolute bargain for Ā£3.

#amwriting #writingcommunity #writingresource #showdonttell

Last updated 2 years ago

Real Quack · @ducker
71 followers · 1266 posts · Server union.place

@JourneyAlign

In education (and likely other places) it's called

It's related to the trope for writers.

#modeling #showdonttell

Last updated 2 years ago

Petrichor · @sinabhfuil
703 followers · 3970 posts · Server mastodon.ie

I'm running a ten-week online creative writing course, every
Tuesday evening from the week of 21 January, one 1.5 hour class a week. Subjects: Mise-En-ScĆØne, Dialogue, Point of View, Show-Don't-Tell, Foreshadowing, Description, The Hero's Journey,
Research, Writer's Block, Plot.
Course costs ā‚¬120 mit.enrol.ie/crumlinaejan23/
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#creativewriting #stories #miseenscene #dialogue #pointofview #showdonttell #foreshadowing #description #herosjourney #research #writersblock #plot #writingcourse

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AnneFisher · @AnneTheWriter
936 followers · 366 posts · Server mstdn.party

One of the most common issues I've seen when editing is when writers fail to .

SHOW me the char is sad, don't come out and TELL me they're sad.

SHOW me the forest is scary--and frighten me when I read itšŸ˜±--don't TELL me to be afraid of the scary forest.

It enriches your narrative & engages your readers when you show them what's happening, and don't tell them what to feel & think.

annethewriter33.wordpress.com/

#showdonttell #writingcommunity #Writing #writingtips #writingadvice #writersofmastodon

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Adnan · @Decad3nce
108 followers · 342 posts · Server fosstodon.org

learnxinyminutes.com/ is one of the best tools for learning new programming languages or refreshing on math concepts as they relate to computer science.

Highly recommend for people who love seeing inline examples of concepts.

#programming #showdonttell #protips #math

Last updated 2 years ago

Petrichor · @sinabhfuil
585 followers · 2813 posts · Server mastodon.ie
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Jen Pitch · @thelittledeath
46 followers · 91 posts · Server writing.exchange

@clpolk am not surprised Witchmark made it. You are amazing at giving so much info without giant infodumps. Reading your series has really helped me trust the reader to just slowly get it without having to vomit a bunch of exposition at them. So thank you ā¤ļø

#showdonttell #exposition #writing

Last updated 2 years ago

Fedo Ā¶ · @fdrc_md
33 followers · 155 posts · Server mastodon.uno
Dr Robert N. Winter :ver: :pm: · @robert
280 followers · 1226 posts · Server social.winter.ink

Stunning moon tonight glinting through the clouds. My capture does not do justice to its majestic beauty.

ā€˜Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light.ā€™ ā€” Anton Chekhov

#moon #moonshine #showdonttell

Last updated 2 years ago

Flaugaard · @flaugaard
90 followers · 236 posts · Server mastodon.online

@JesperBuhl du skal da dele links šŸ˜ŠšŸ‘ŒšŸ» hvad stil er du i? Jeg er i ambient/etellerandet med indflydelse fra klassisk og rĆ„k šŸ˜†

#music #showdonttell

Last updated 3 years ago